The first semester of 2010, I had Ms.Devaney; she encouraged me to write a short essay. I wrote “This What I Believe” and “American dream.” Both of the essays are very short and didn’t have thesis and also didn’t have very clear information of the topic. It contained personal experience, but I didn’t put enough detail into it.
The second semester, I have Mrs. L.G.; she explained to me about what should I put on my essay and explained to me all the different sections; like Introduction, thesis, personal experiences, and conclusion. I learned how to write an essay using different terms and different words to describe things and also use different point of views to write an essay.
I learned that each essay has different section. Each section provides different information and he information need to have connection with the topic. Throughout this year, I know how to give a strong thesis statement, and also how to write a clear conclusion. Sometimes, when we are writing an essay, we have to provide lots facts and different kind of information about the topic.
It’s also very important that we give a personal experience that is related to the main point of the essay. When I am writing an essay, I have to make sure that I can be able to use different words to describe things and also give lots details about my experience.
This year at International High School, I have learned lots things about how to write an essay and also I have improved a lot throughout the year. I understand more things than before and my writing has getting better and better.
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